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Sick as fuck mate!

Jimmypig responds:

Thanks mate ;)

I'm taking in mind that Spaze made the remix of the I am number four, and that you have the vocals so I will only comment about you.

0:00 - 0:45
I feel like the "yeah" was out of place, like it didn't fit, I was expecting the vocals to be out of place in the rest of the song aswell.

1:05 - 1:55
I loved the vocals and placement in this part, they were perfect and it was much better than I was expecting.

2:00 - 2:22
Here the "yeah" vocals start again, a bit unfitting just as the start and I feel like skipping this part because of them.

2:22 - 3:15
The good part again, "YES!" I am thinking. I really love it and the vocals are like perfectly synced to the song.

3:15 - 3:25
I was thinking there was a production fail but when it got cut of the second time I realized it was planned and it sounded very good actually.

3:25 - 3:50
Here the "yeah" is starting and I still dislike it.

3:50 - 4:40
I like how this part is just the original song so it has a very smooth finish, and I like that you didn't rap at this part.

Summary:
The overall rapping was extremely good, but the "yeah" sorta ruined it for me. Nevertheless 4/5 and I hope you keep on doing what you do best!

Poniiboi responds:

What I do best is "yeahs" LOL j/k Thanx 4 takin the time for the details...will definitely take all into consideration

I actually thoroughly enjoyed the song. The bass was very lovely, I wouldn't mind a new drum beat pattern like some nasty snare and Glitchy beat also the bass could do with a bit more variation.

By the last part I mean the actually notes need changing, not the bass sounds. Those are perfect just change the layout a bit! Can't wait for the full version!

I loved the atmosphere and piano at the first 27 seconds or so but when the bass kicked in and the piano faded out I kinda lost interest. I am taking in consideration that this is a WIP.

The first 2 seconds when the bass kicks in is amazing but you need to keep the same melody or atleast change it to something similar and just as spetacular.

Can't wait to hear the full version!

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