Sick as fuck mate!

I'm taking in mind that Spaze made the remix of the I am number four, and that you have the vocals so I will only comment about you.

0:00 - 0:45
I feel like the "yeah" was out of place, like it didn't fit, I was expecting the vocals to be out of place in the rest of the song aswell.

1:05 - 1:55
I loved the vocals and placement in this part, they were perfect and it was much better than I was expecting.

2:00 - 2:22
Here the "yeah" vocals start again, a bit unfitting just as the start and I feel like skipping this part because of them.

2:22 - 3:15
The good part again, "YES!" I am thinking. I really love it and the vocals are like perfectly synced to the song.

3:15 - 3:25
I was thinking there was a production fail but when it got cut of the second time I realized it was planned and it sounded very good actually.

3:25 - 3:50
Here the "yeah" is starting and I still dislike it.

3:50 - 4:40
I like how this part is just the original song so it has a very smooth finish, and I like that you didn't rap at this part.

Summary:
The overall rapping was extremely good, but the "yeah" sorta ruined it for me. Nevertheless 4/5 and I hope you keep on doing what you do best!

I actually thoroughly enjoyed the song. The bass was very lovely, I wouldn't mind a new drum beat pattern like some nasty snare and Glitchy beat also the bass could do with a bit more variation.

By the last part I mean the actually notes need changing, not the bass sounds. Those are perfect just change the layout a bit! Can't wait for the full version!